Chapter 2 of 10

Registration and Flagrant Fouls

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The path to the Vermilion Crane Pavilion twisted through the market district, a labyrinth of stalls hawking medicinal herbs, polished spirit-stones, and enchanted talismans. Wei Zhan navigated the jostling crowd, his gaze fixed on the soaring red spires that pierced the pale morning sky. The Pavilion, a masterpiece of crimson wood and gilded eaves, seemed to thrum with a silent, expectant energy. In his hand, he clutched a stout, unvarnished bough of dense timber, its bark rough and tip blunted. “A fine piece of sporting equipment, wouldn’t you say, Gou?” Zhan muttered, hefting the bough. “Light, balanced, and strictly regulation. None of those barbaric blades for me. We’re here for clean athletics.” *“You’re here to get your pathetic hide flayed, boy!”* Old Man Gou’s voice rasped from the hilt of Gluttonous Rust, a dry, grating sound. *“A wooden stick? Are you planning to swat flies or plant turnips? This isn’t some kindergarten sparring match! It’s a blood-soaked pit, and you’re bringing kindling to a dragon hunt!”* Zhan scoffed. “Dragon hunt? Gou, please. We’re entering the Grand Martial Ascent. It’s a prestigious event. There are rules, decorum. What kind of official would allow an athlete to wield a sharpened spear against a blunted practice weapon? It simply wouldn’t be sporting.” The registration queue was a sprawling, agitated serpent of aspirants snaking across the outer plaza. Practitioners of every stripe—from grizzled vagrants in patched rags to sleek scions in silk—elbowed for position, their spirit essence humming across stone tiles. Zhan joined the tail end, diligently keeping two paces from the fellow ahead, a wiry novice with a twitching eyelid. “Personal space, an often-overlooked rule,” Zhan murmured to himself. “Crucial for maintaining focus.” Suddenly, a ripple of indignation spread through the line. A young man, bedecked in robes of shimmering azure, forced his way through the middle of the queue. His face was a mask of sneering superiority, his hands casually adorned with several glimmering spirit rings. He shoved aside a gaunt-faced wanderer, nearly sending him to the cobblestones. “Out of my way, you mud-splattered wretch!” the youth snapped. “Do you not know who I am? I am Jin Long, third son of the Azure Serpent Clan! I do not wait among common filth!” The wanderer, a thin man clutching a dog-eared primer, raised a hand. “Young Master Jin… we’ve queued since dawn. It’s irregular.” Jin Long scowled. “Irregular? I’ll teach you decorum!” With a flourish, he drew a gleaming jade-hilted saber, its blade humming with nascent Qi. He slashed the flat of the steel down, whistling an inch from the man's ear and forcing an undignified yelp. The crowd murmured, some disgusted, others merely wary. No one intervened. Wei Zhan, however, felt a surge of pure, unadulterated outrage. He took two swift strides forward, his wooden branch held ready. “Hold it right there, contestant Jin Long!” he barked, his voice ringing over the flagstones. “That is a flagrant foul! Illegal contact during a non-combat phase! Unsportsmanlike conduct of the highest degree!” Jin Long paused, saber half-lowered, and cast a baffled scowl at Zhan. “Who in the Nine Hells are you, you ragged street dog? Get out of my sight before I carve you into worm food!” “I am Wei Zhan, and I’m here to ensure clean play!” Zhan declared, stepping between Jin Long and the cowering novice. “Rulebook section 4, subsection C: ‘All participants shall maintain respectful conduct towards fellow competitors, staff, and observers at all times, both on and off the designated arena grounds.’ And your little display just now? That’s a clear violation! I’m surprised the referees haven’t already issued a red card!” Jin Long burst into derisive laughter, joined by his sycophants. “A red card? What gibberish is this? This isn’t some children’s game, you imbecile! This is the martial realm, where might dictates order! And you, with your… *stick*? You dare lecture me?” His Qi flared, a clear warning. “Get out of my way, or face the consequences!” “Consequences? My friend, you’re the one facing a point deduction!” Zhan retorted, raising his stave defensively. “You struck toward an unarmed entrant outside designated rings. That’s an immediate foul in any reputable circuit!” Jin Long’s face twisted into a sneer. “Then let’s see if your ‘reputable league’ can save you from this!” He swung his jade saber in a vicious arc, aiming for Zhan’s head. It was a powerful, Qi-infused strike, meant to intimidate and maim. *An unsanctioned strike before the bell! A gross violation of participant safety codes!* Zhan didn't yield ground. Channeling energy through scarred pathways under Gluttonous Rust’s guiding pull, he met the incoming edge with an upward swat of his blunted stave. It was a fundamental blocking move, taught in the most basic of martial drills, but now infused with a raw, focused power. The jade saber shrieked as it met the branch. A sound like grinding teeth echoed across the plaza, followed by a sharp CRACK! Jin Long froze, staring dumbfounded at the point of contact. His prized jade saber, an heirloom of his clan, shattered into a dozen glittering fragments, showering the ground like green snow. Before any piece could settle, a faint, almost imperceptible shimmering passed over the area. *“Tsk, pathetic quality,”* Gou grumbled, his voice a sated purr within Zhan’s mind. *“Barely a snack.”* Jin Long stared at the bare hilt in his hand, then at the glittering shards, his cheeks flushing mottled red. “My… my Crimson Serpent Saber! You… you broke it!” “Well, what did you expect, striking a peer with cheap gear?” Zhan huffed, lowering his stave. “If you cannot maintain your kit, stick to unranked scrimmages. That’s an equipment failure penalty right there. Procure an approved sparring blade next time.” A sudden hush fell over the flagstones, quelling the commotion around Jin Long’s public shame. A retinue of figures, clad in robes the color of fresh frost, glided into the square. At their vanguard, a woman moved with an ethereal grace, her presence silencing every whisper, stilling every motion. Su Meilin. Her hair, the shade of polished raven feathers, framed a face of breathtaking serenity, her eyes like distant, crystalline pools. She moved with the quiet dignity of a frost lotus, surrounded by a subtle aura of power that commanded respect. The crowd parted instinctively, awestruck. Su Meilin, daughter of the Azure Cloud Peaks’ Sect Leader, a prodigy whose name was whispered across all Nine Cauldron Realm, was here. Her gaze swept the paving, pausing on the splintered jade beside Zhan's boots. For an instant, her pupil caught his, flicking with quiet wariness before settling into icy neutrality. She did not acknowledge him, did not even offer a nod. Instead, her head turned slightly, her attention seemingly fixed on the grand entrance of the Pavilion. As she passed Zhan, her silken sleeve brushed his arm. A fleeting, almost imperceptible contact. But in that brief touch, something small and smooth pressed into his palm. She continued on, her stride unbroken, her expression unchanged. The cultivators around them, too mesmerized by her radiant presence, noticed nothing. Zhan looked down. In his hand, nestled beneath his fingers, was a small, intricately carved jade token, glowing with a soft, inner light. It bore the insignia of the Vermilion Crane Pavilion, and etched beneath it, the single character for ‘Elite’. A premium entry token, bypassing the initial, grueling trials, granting direct access to the main competition barracks. “Ah, an administrative marshal,” Zhan mused, slipping the token into his pouch. “How considerate. Part of the committee's protocol for queue relief. Even with his misconduct, young Master Jin still gets his entry processed, I imagine. A remarkably patient sanctioning body.” *“Patience? Boy, that was a bribe! A bloody, blatant bribe from a well-wisher!”* Gou snarled. *“Are you truly so thick? She practically shoved it down your throat!”* “Nonsense, Gou. It’s just proper administrative procedure,” Zhan replied, completely oblivious. He ignored Jin Long’s sputtering rage and the murmurs behind him. He marched with renewed vigor towards the registration desk, the Elite token secured, convinced that his strict adherence to 'league rules' was already earning him commendations. He presented the token to a bored-looking attendant, who merely grunted, scanned it, and pointed him towards a massive, bronze-plated door. “Barracks 7. In you go, contestant. Don’t dawdle.” Zhan nodded, a polite smile on his face. “Thank you for your assistance, referee! Wishing you a fair and exciting tournament!” He stepped through the archway into a dim hall filled with hundreds of martial artists, their features hardened with barely suppressed bloodlust. The air was thick with the scent of iron and ozone. The moment he crossed the threshold, the immense bronze doors slammed shut behind him with a deafening, metallic clang that reverberated through the very stone. The sudden darkness was absolute, save for the faint glow of scattered spirit lamps along the walls. Then, a voice, deep and resonant, boomed from unseen speakers, echoing through the cavernous space. “Welcome, cultivators, to the Grand Martial Ascent! Consider this your first trial. Of the three hundred souls currently within this room… only half will leave alive.”

End of Chapter 2