Chapter 9 of 10
Thermal Feedback
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Bramien didn't flinch. His gaze locked onto the trigger unit in the old man's grip, then shifted to an engine gear half-buried in scrap by the doorway. He moved with the fluid, silent grace of a hunter, barely disturbing the accumulated dust as he snatched the gear. It was heavy, a solid chunk of steel designed to transmit immense rotational force, but in Bramien’s grip, it became a projectile.
With a grunt that was more expulsion of air than effort, Bramien hurled the gear upward. It arced through the superheated air, a dark blur against the steam, rotating end over end with terrifying momentum. Ignac, still gloating, didn't even register the incoming danger until the heavy metal disc smashed into his extended arm with a sickening CRACK! that reverberated through the facility. Bone splintered, a sound like a dry branch snapping underfoot, and Ignac shrieked, a high, reedy sound of agony. His hand spasmed, fingers flying open.
[CRITICAL ERROR: DETONATOR LOST]
The firing cap tumbled free. It bounced once off the overhead gangway, a black speck against iron plating, then plummeted. It spun, an accelerating blur, until it vanished into the roaring, hungry maw of the primary furnace below. A brief, searing flash of orange light erupted from the depths, then was swallowed by the inferno. The whistle from the central pipe intensified to a shriek. The main gauge shuddered, its dial vibrating violently past the red mark.
The patriarch staggered against the railing, cradling the shattered forearm while spit flew from his lips. “No… No! It wasn’t meant to go off yet!”
Bramien didn’t waste a moment on words. He scrambled up an iron ladder leading to the upper platform, his repaired legs surging with mechanical precision. Each rung clanged under his boots, a rhythmic ascent of vengeance. Zivena, holding Nika tightly, watched him go. His silhouette cut through the fog like a piston rod.
He hit the gangway planks, the impact shivering the steel girders. Ignac scrambled backward on his heels, whimpering. “Bramien, son, wait! It was for the family! For the legacy!”
Bramien’s response was a punch that lifted Ignac off his feet. The impact was a wet thud, the sound of bone meeting bone, and Ignac slammed against the railing. Another punch cracked against ribs, driving out breath. The commune boss folded over Bramien's knuckles. Molars clattered across the iron grates, and pleas choked into red foam. Bramien kept hitting him, a controlled, furious rhythm, until Ignac was a broken, unresponsive mess, pinned against the metal grate.
Meanwhile, Zivena sprang into action. The furnace roared, the bypass stack shrieking under runaway compression. The trigger mechanism melting inside the coal fire had sparked the core sequence. The thermal feedback loop she had secretly slipped into the commune's stolen boiler schematics had kicked in. It was designed to redirect, not prevent, the explosion. Time was measured in seconds.
“Yovela! Take Nika! Get out!” Zivena shouted over the din, shoving Nika into the socialite’s startled arms. Yovela, pale but resolute, clutched Nika tightly and began to drag the little girl towards the exit.
Zivena didn’t hesitate. The primary steam line, a monstrous artery of superheated metal, thrummed violently. She could feel the scorching heat radiating off it, hot enough to strip flesh from bone. Her mental library flickered, showing the remaining water in her healing spring – a mere half-liter. It had to be enough.
She chugged the last of the revitalizing water, the cool liquid a jarring contrast to the inferno around her, then lunged. Grabbing a heavy industrial pipe wrench from a nearby tool rack, she slid under the thrumming main valve, the scalding steam immediately blistering exposed skin. Pain flared, a thousand needles of fire, but the healing water began its work, stitching nerves and sealing capillaries even as they burned. She ignored the agony, her mind a cold, calculating machine.
Her transmigrated memories, a blend of her past self’s expertise and her own cutting-edge knowledge, provided the precise, flawed equation she’d subtly embedded in Ignac’s bomb schematics. The feedback loop was now active, redirecting the colossal force. But it needed a physical pathway.
Leaning her full weight into the iron wrench, Zivena cranked open three secondary exhaust lines. The scalding steam hissed and spat as she forced the ancient mechanisms to obey. Her hands, despite the healing, were raw and reddened, but she paid it no mind. She was physically rerouting the explosive force, channeling the impending catastrophe.
The high-pitched whistle of the main valve began to drop, replaced by a deep, resonant rumble that vibrated through the floor. The intake dial, pinned at its limit, shuddered backward toward the amber tick marks. The commune was saved. The steam plant would not explode horizontally, annihilating everything in its path.
Instead, the compression vented straight upward through the bypass shaft toward the roof rafters. Directly above sat the patriarch's plush third-floor office and vault, the repository of stolen blueprints and ledgers. The feedback loop transformed the exhaust flue into a vertical cannon.
“Bramien! Nika! Down!” Zivena roared, her voice raw. Bramien, having finally ceased his brutal pummeling of Ignac, hauled the battered patriarch over his shoulder and dropped ten feet to the flagstones. He covered Nika and Yovela with his own body just as Zivena dove beside them.
A second later, the roof overhead blew apart. A deafening ROAR tore through the facility, a sound of compressed air and exploding steel. The entire upper section of the Varga Industrial Township's central building erupted in a blinding flash of orange and white, followed by a concussive blast that flattened nearby structures. The air filled with the smell of ozone and burning paper, and then, through the shattered rafters where the strongroom had sat, a blizzard of scorched vellum rained over the courtyard. Sizzling technical schematics spiraled into the soot, their ink blistering into black crusts.