Chapter 3 of 10

The Patriarch's Check-In

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Aboard the Veltis Maritime flagship, the *Abyssal Sovereign*, Corrado Veltis ran a gnarled hand over a shimmering holomap. The projection pulsed with data, outlining Sanaro City in spectral blue, its illicit ports glowing like open wounds on the coastline. At the center of the Garren Syndicate’s territory, a single, flickering red dot marked their current stronghold—the chop-shop. Corrado’s lips, thin and bloodless, curved into something resembling pride as he listened to the silence on the comm. Miro’s brief, disarming confusion had been a masterstroke, he decided. A feigned naivete designed to lull the Garren heiress into a false sense of security. “The boy has an instinct for the theatrical,” Corrado murmured, his voice a low rasp against the quiet thrum of the command bridge. “A rare finesse.” He believed Miro was playing a long game, establishing rapport before the inevitable, devastating strike. He reviewed recent satellite feeds of the chop-shop: Miro, seemingly engaged in domestic tasks, had actually been gathering intelligence on structural weaknesses, personnel movements. The Veltis patriarch nodded, a slow, deliberate motion. His grandson was truly a chip off the old block, even if he hid his brutality under a veneer of soft-spoken politeness. Meanwhile, in the Garren Syndicate’s cramped breakroom, Miro stared at his comm, the dial tone a faint echo against the distant clang of metal. His brow was still furrowed. “Grandfather, wait,” he’d tried to say, but the line was dead. *Eliminate the competition? Secure dominance?* He shook his head, baffled by the disconnect. It sounded like Corrado thought he was here for a hostile takeover, not, as Miro understood it, to simply re-establish a stable, mutually beneficial relationship with Nyssa and recover his lost five-star rating. He sighed, running a hand through his slightly damp hair. Perhaps his grandfather was just being dramatic. All the Veltis family ever talked about was ‘dominance’ and ‘asset acquisition.’ Miro just wanted to show Nyssa that genuine connection was possible, even in a city built on steel and deceit. He wanted to prove that kindness wasn’t a weakness. And that his driving skills were, despite her one-star review, impeccable. He checked his delivery app again, hoping for a notification that the rating had been rescinded. Nothing. The single red star glowed mockingly. He pulled out his personal comm, the one Nyssa had used to send him the chop-shop coordinates. He typed out a message, his thumbs moving with practiced precision: “Nyssa, I think there’s been a slight misunderstanding with my family. They seem to believe I’m here for… a hostile corporate takeover? I assure you, my only goal is to earn back your trust and help you achieve your objectives. And perhaps, if you’re open to it, cultivate a truly genuine friendship.” He paused, considering. “Also, I noticed your comms tower has some signal degradation. I could probably fix that, if you’d like. It’d really help with your outreach efforts.” He hesitated, then added, “And maybe boost your customer satisfaction scores.” He pressed send. Just as the message winged its way into the labyrinthine network of Sanaro, a distant *CRUMP* rattled the fortified walls. It was followed by the screech of grinding metal, a sound that cut through the usual cacophony of the chop-shop. Miro blinked. That wasn’t the sound of Tassio trying to intimidate him again. That was… louder. Nyssa, who had been hunched over a flickering data-slate in the main hangar, slammed her palm down on the console. “Intrusion alert! Sector Gamma! Perimeter blown!” Her voice, usually a whip-crack, was tight with barely suppressed fury. The holographic map above her flared red, pinpointing multiple rapidly advancing signatures. “Ironclad Freight. They found us,” she snarled, grabbing a heavy-caliber plasma rifle from a nearby rack. “Tassio! Where are you?!” From a shadowed corner, Tassio Fenn emerged, a sheepish, almost apologetic look on his face. “Right here, Nyssa. Just… securing the secondary access points.” He gave her a weak smile, but his eyes darted towards the main entrance where the first breach alarm blared. He knew the secondary access points offered zero escape; he had already handed over every patrol schedule and passcode. A section of the chop-shop’s outer wall, reinforced with layers of ceramite and ferro-steel, groaned under a massive impact. A blinding flash of purple energy erupted, followed by a deafening roar as a section of the wall simply *vaporized*. Dust and shrapnel exploded inwards, revealing a squad of hulking figures in plated tactical gear. They carried energy rifles that glowed with malevolent purple light, and their leader, a mountain of a man with an eye patch and a snarling cybernetic jaw, stepped through the smoking gap. “Garren! Time’s up!” his voice boomed, distorted by a modulator. “Damn it!” Nyssa yelled, leveling her rifle. “They’re using heavy-grade demolition charges! Tassio, get the defenses online! Now!” Tassio froze, his fingers twitching against his holstered sidearm as his gaze flicked between Nyssa and the advancing raiders. He hadn’t expected them to be this… *blunt*. He’d thought it would be a subtle takeover, not an outright invasion. Miro, hearing the commotion, had pushed open the breakroom door. He saw the shattered wall, the dust, the glowing weapons. He saw Nyssa, standing alone against the encroaching giants. His mind, ever the optimist, immediately jumped to the most positive interpretation. “Oh, excellent!” he exclaimed, his voice cutting through the din. “Looks like we’re finally getting to the team-building exercises! I knew you’d come around, Nyssa!” He spotted a gleaming, heavy-duty torque wrench lying on a nearby workbench, its chrome polished to a mirror sheen. It was a monstrous tool, easily three feet long, designed for industrial-grade vehicle maintenance. Miro, however, saw it as the perfect implement for aggressive, yet precise, problem-solving. “And you even brought the specialty tools!” he enthused, snatching it up with a grin. “Perfect for getting those bolts properly aligned for structural integrity!” He rushed forward, the heavy wrench clutched in his hand, a beacon of bewildering cheer in the midst of the chaos. The lead enforcer, marked by syndicate tattoos denoting him as a top demolitions hound, raised his plasma rifle, aiming squarely at Nyssa. He barked a command to his squad: “Secure the heiress! Eliminate all resistance!” Miro, oblivious to the deadly intent, saw the lead gunman standing near a massive hydraulic car lift, its platform currently supporting a stripped-down combat transport. “Oh, this is brilliant!” Miro declared, jogging towards the assassin. “A lift! Perfect for getting a better angle on those stubborn chassis supports!” He reached out, not for the gunman, but for a panel of glowing buttons on the control console beside the lift. “Just need to find the right actuator… ah, here we go! Up, up, and away!” With a cheerful click, Miro pressed the large, red button labeled ‘DESCENT – EMERGENCY OVERRIDE’. The car lift, which had been slowly rising, shuddered violently, then began to plummet downwards with terrifying speed. The enforcer, surprised by Miro’s sudden lunge toward a mundane maintenance rig, glanced at the descending platform just as Miro, still grinning, stepped back to admire his work. The six-ton chassis slammed down onto the lift’s base with a deafening *CRUNCH*. The lead enforcer, standing precisely where Miro had assumed ‘better angles’ were needed for maintenance, vanished instantly beneath the collapsing platform and the mass of reinforced steel. A sickening, wet thud echoed through the hangar. Nyssa, plasma rifle still raised, stared. Her mouth twitched in silent disbelief, her stare flicking from the mangled wreckage of the lift, to the crushed space where the point man had stood, and then to Miro, who was now polishing the torque wrench with a satisfied hum. He looked up, his expression innocent and helpful. “See? Much better access now! What’s next on the team-building agenda?”

End of Chapter 3

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