Chapter 1 of 10
The First Wind is the Hardest
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The sun, a molten coin, bled light across the jagged peaks of the Spire of Whispering Winds, but no warmth reached Hakan Yilmaz. His back pressed against the rough-hewn rock of a secluded training yard, a place rarely used by the academy’s elite. He was surrounded. Three upperclassmen, led by Batu Demir, a brute whose Ruh-infused fists were as famous as his lack of patience, loomed over him.
“Still think your little jokes are funny, Yilmaz?” Batu snarled, his voice a low rumble. His companions, Cenk and Erol, snickered, their shadows stretching long and distorted in the late afternoon sun. “You think just because you make the younger girls giggle, you’re untouchable?”
Hakan managed a lopsided grin, though his stomach churned with a cold dread. “Just spreading a little joy, Batu. It’s a thankless job, but someone’s gotta do it. Maybe you should try it sometime. Might loosen that perpetually clenched jaw.”
Batu’s face darkened, a vein throbbing in his temple. “Funny. We’re going to teach you a lesson about respect, Yilmaz. A real lesson. One that’ll make sure you remember your place at the bottom of the tiers.” He cracked his knuckles, the sound like dry branches snapping. His Ruh shimmered faintly around his fists, a faint amber glow that promised pain.
Hakan’s pulse battered his throat. He was good at talking, at deflecting, at making people laugh so they wouldn't notice he wasn't as strong as he pretended. But Ruh, the spiritual essence that powered their world, didn't care for witty banter. And his own Ruh, while present, felt like a flickering candle next to Batu’s roaring bonfire. He’d practiced the First Wind Form a thousand times, just like everyone else, but the spark of innate talent that made prodigies like Aylin Koray shine had always eluded him. He was a mimic, a showman, not a true martial artist.
Cenk and Erol moved to flank him, cutting off any escape. This wasn’t just a sparring match; Batu’s eyes held a vicious gleam. He was going to break something. His arm, his ribs, maybe even his spirit. Hakan’s grin faltered, his bravado wearing thin. He scrambled for another joke, another quip, but his mind was a blank.
Batu wound up, his right fist glowing brighter. “Let’s see how funny you are with a ruined shoulder, clown.”
Just as the punch began its arc, a shimmering, translucent blue pane materialized directly in Hakan’s sight. It overlaid his view of Batu’s sneering face, momentarily disorienting him.
[Repetition Karma System Activated!]
The words pulsed, stark and urgent. Hakan blinked, wondering if the impending impact had already rattled his brain. What in the Ruh-drenched pits of the deep Khaganates was this magic?
Batu’s fist was a blur, closing in. Instinct, pure, unadulterated terror, took over. Hakan didn’t think; he just reacted, muscles screaming in protest. He threw the only thing he knew, the most basic, foundational move drilled into every academy initiate since they could walk: the First Wind Form punch. It was a simple, outward thrust, meant to generate a basic ripple of Ruh. His form was rushed, sloppy, fueled by desperation, not skill.
[First Wind Form Repetition: 1]
[Power Level: 1]
[Karma Gained: 1 x 1 = 1]
[Current Karma: 1]
The punch connected. Not with Batu, who skillfully dodged the pathetic, flailing strike, but with the empty air where Batu had been. Hakan’s fist, still moving, slammed into a weathered stone training dummy that stood innocently behind the bully. The dummy, a solid block of granite reinforced with centuries of Ruh cultivation, shuddered.
[First Wind Form Repetition: 2]
[Power Level: 1]
[Karma Gained: 1 x 2 = 2]
[Current Karma: 3]
Then, before Hakan could even register the shock of the interface, the pane flared again, multiplying numbers at dizzying speed.
[First Wind Form Repetition: 3]
[Power Level: 1]
[Karma Gained: 1 x 3 = 3]
[Current Karma: 6]
His arm felt… wrong. Not weak, but charged, humming with a nascent energy that made the hairs on his arm prickle. The stone dummy, which should have been impervious, developed a hairline crack.
[First Wind Form Repetition: 4]
[Power Level: 1]
[Karma Gained: 1 x 4 = 4]
[Current Karma: 10]
The crack deepened, spiderwebbing across the dummy’s surface. Hakan’s gaze darted between the impossibly fast-counting numbers and the destruction under his knuckle.
[First Wind Form Repetition: 5]
[Power Level: 1]
[Karma Gained: 1 x 5 = 5]
[Current Karma: 15]
With a sound like thunder splitting a dry riverbed, the stone dummy exploded. Shards of ancient granite shrapnel flew outwards, peppering the ground, tearing divots from the earth. The force of it knocked Batu off his feet, sending him sprawling into the dust, groaning.
Cenk and Erol stared, mouths agape, their Ruh guttering out around them in pure shock. Hakan stared too, his arm still outstretched, a faint tendril of shimmering, golden Ruh now coiling around his fist. It was a Ruh signature he'd never felt before, not his, yet unmistakably from him.
[Total Repetitions: 5]
[Current Karma: 15]
[Level Up!]
[Power Level: 2]
Another notification, bigger, brighter than the rest, filled his vision.
[New Ability Acquired: Swift Repetition – Perform a sequence of repetitive actions at exponentially increasing speed for a short duration!]
His jaw hung slack. He had just… leveled up? By striking a dummy? And pulverized it? He looked at Batu, who was gingerly touching his head, dust clinging to his hair. The bully looked less like a fearsome upperclassman and more like a confused toddler.
“W-what was that?” Cenk stammered, his gaze darting between the ruined dummy and Hakan. “You… you just blew up the training block!”
Hakan slowly lowered his arm, a wide, disbelieving grin spreading across his face. It wasn’t his usual cheeky, practiced smirk. This was genuine, a joyous, almost insane burst of pure elation. “Oops?” he said, the single word dripping with a shameless, newfound confidence. He couldn't help it. The surge of power, the sheer absurdity of it all, made him feel… glorious.
He took a step forward, and Cenk and Erol instinctively stumbled back, fear etched on their faces. Even Batu, still on the ground, scrambled away, his earlier bravado replaced by sheer terror. Hakan had no intention of hurting them further, but watching them cower felt… unexpectedly good. He had always been the one making light of things, deflecting, avoiding actual confrontation because he knew he’d lose. Not anymore.
As he savored the moment, a subtle shift in the shadows near the entrance to the yard caught his eye. A streak of deep azure caught his eye, carrying the scent of jasmine that always clung to her. He turned, his triumphant grin still plastered on his face, ready to share his absurd, miraculous victory with the world. Ready to share it, specifically, with *her*.
There, half-hidden by the twisting branches of a Ruh-tree, stood Aylin Koray. Her long, dark hair, usually a disciplined cascade, seemed to almost bristle around her. Her eyes, those intelligent, piercing eyes that always seemed to see right through his defenses, weren't filled with the usual calculating assessment or polite indifference. They were wide, horrified. A stark mask of pure, unadulterated terror.
Hakan’s smile evaporated. He started to call out her name, “Aylin… wait, you won’t believe what just happened—”
Before the words cleared his mouth, a quiet whisper rode the breeze. Aylin didn’t look at him, her gaze fixed on the rubble, on the faint golden Ruh still clinging to his fist. Her voice was raspy, broken, as if she were reliving a nightmare.
“It’s starting again.”
Then, with a speed that defied the laws of physics, she vanished into the deeper shadows, leaving only the lingering scent of jasmine and the echoing chill of her words.